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Post by SymbolicMyth on Feb 2, 2005 15:24:23 GMT -5
The Man Behind The Wheel My god, this song probably sucks more ass than anything else ever. But read it if you want, whatever I don't care. Don't flame, remember, but if you've got stuff to say then please do. You dress your soldiers in their suits And then you tell us why it’s good To maim, kill, slaughter and destroy V1 All the people caught up in your war Chemical Ali never existed He was a plot to make sure you were covered And while the third world subsists V2 On £1 a day your battle waged on Through September 11th you made sure You had an excuse to fight more and more And the minorities never saw V3 What you were really fighting in your war It’s just another day and just another rattle For the man at the helm of the endless battle And the world’s losses he will never feel C It’s just another day for the man behind the wheel Man behind the wheel R
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Post by Kariah on Feb 2, 2005 15:26:43 GMT -5
Thats quite good actually
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Post by SymbolicMyth on Feb 2, 2005 15:27:15 GMT -5
Do you think? Thanks a lot. It's not my first attempt at song writing, but it's probably my most mature. Maybe.
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Post by nathan on Feb 4, 2005 7:19:34 GMT -5
Jingle bells joseph smells Kariah layd an egg, blah blah blah i dont no the rest of the fkn words!
Aint dat jus the best song u've eva erd!
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Post by claire on Feb 4, 2005 7:20:21 GMT -5
its called 'Shadow'...
I am the face you see when you close your eyes.... I am the secret you cannot control.... I am the whisper that taints your soul.... I am the scream you can't block out.... I am the one who's haunting you.... Do you wish I was dead? I am the cry that hums in your throat.... I am the shadow that follows your step.... I am the wish that you left unspoken.... I am the promise you had bitterly broken.... I am the dark in the pit of your heart.... I am the grave you left open.... I am the lie you kept deeply hidden.... I am the shadow that will not sleep....
And you're too weak to face me.
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Post by claire on Feb 4, 2005 7:22:33 GMT -5
I have loads of songs that I wrote back when I was in Heathen Temple. They were really good. But we never got to hear them as I got kicked out. My bandmates wouldn't have liked them anyway, cuz they would've been too angsty... ain't that right Joe?
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Post by SymbolicMyth on Feb 4, 2005 10:28:09 GMT -5
To be honest, I don't want to do angsty songs. I'm sure they were brilliant in their own right, but they weren't the songs we were looking for.
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Post by Wimbledon on Feb 9, 2005 4:31:39 GMT -5
i like your angst songs
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Post by Wimbledon on Feb 9, 2005 4:36:41 GMT -5
Apart from u nathan
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Post by claire on Feb 9, 2005 4:49:23 GMT -5
i like your angst songs thank you very much!
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Post by Wimbledon on Feb 9, 2005 10:41:10 GMT -5
sok
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Post by Wimbledon on Feb 9, 2005 10:42:01 GMT -5
thats meant 2 b thats ok b4 u accuse me of spammin
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Post by claire on Feb 26, 2005 8:10:39 GMT -5
This is the chorus from a song I wrote called 'Broken Wings'
I'll be your broken angel, You can have my broken heart, Will you wipe the tears from my broken eyes? Will you mend my broken wings?
Cool, huh?
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Post by StockholmSyndrome on Mar 11, 2005 4:34:26 GMT -5
I've just written this. -------------------------------- Out of the window Out of the blue In from the cold night In just for you
You called to me Didn’t you? (CHORUS) Didn’t you? Didn’t you?
Now out of the door Stop following me It’s nothing personal Just leave me be
(CHORUS)
Are you really there? Or am I just dreaming? I just can’t be sure And thoughts are all gleaming
(CHORUS)
Running away From something unreal Has never been easy But I could just feel
You running beside me As I tried to escape But it didn’t work I can’t run from fate
(CHORUS) --------------------------------
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Post by Kariah on Mar 28, 2005 16:40:39 GMT -5
Thats really interesting ;D
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